slch
Contributor
- Joined
- Mar 30, 2019
- Messages
- 420
- Apr 18, 2024
- #21
Feels rushed / axed?
GG tho
Good story
E
eng1
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Nov 11, 2019
- Messages
- 971
- Apr 18, 2024
- #22
So... When does he become a monarch as the title says? At best he is a self governed dukedom with the king being his friend who listens to him. But he isn't really a monarch
Also, I expected Lind to be the one being carried during the wedding
Solipsist said:
I too am shocked this actually ended.
When I saw "141 end", I went: "wtf do you mean 'end'??"The ending feels kinda rushed, but, eh, yeah. Kinda feels like it had no more proper room to power up the MC without power-creeping. So it's better to just end it, than to have the MC gain dragonborn magic blood dual-soul, mcguffin ying-yang powers to maintain reader engagement.
They had plenty of room to grow. He was only 6th wyze, they could have him work to get more countries as his allies as he worked up wyze to 8th before challenging the dragon
Bibliothecarius
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Feb 3, 2018
- Messages
- 493
- Apr 18, 2024
- #23
Thnks for the chapter!
B
bakanisan
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Dec 26, 2019
- Messages
- 601
- Apr 18, 2024
- #24
Solipsist said:
I too am shocked this actually ended.
When I saw "141 end", I went: "wtf do you mean 'end'??"The ending feels kinda rushed, but, eh, yeah. Kinda feels like it had no more proper room to power up the MC without power-creeping. So it's better to just end it, than to have the MC gain dragonborn magic blood dual-soul, mcguffin ying-yang powers to maintain reader engagement.
Agreed, a bit underwhelming but the main storyline is completed. I guess the the series didn't sell well and the publisher wanted to pull o
Drakun_Auger
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Feb 22, 2020
- Messages
- 659
- Apr 18, 2024
- #25
bakanisan said:
Agreed, a bit underwhelming but the main storyline is completed. I guess the the series didn't sell well and the publisher wanted to pull o
I was partially reading on the scanlator's site, so I got some vague ish spoilers beforehand. This is the ending the novel had.
A sidenote, does anyone have a timeline lined up for this? I remember he was in his 40s or older before regressing to 14, but it's a blank after that
T
thegoatrider
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Dec 29, 2018
- Messages
- 3,834
- Apr 19, 2024
- #26
Kaarme said:
I feel like I should remember Chris's fiancée, Agatha, but I don't.
She wasnt hot enough to remember
dowiet
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Jan 8, 2023
- Messages
- 3,408
- Apr 19, 2024
- #27
Yeah there were some downs but mainly ups for this story. Definitely worth a read overall! Cheers to Chris for changing the world.
Also sidestory content huh well let's see what happens.
djtws4e
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Nov 27, 2019
- Messages
- 153
- Apr 19, 2024
- #28
i always appreciated the art on this one - super weak ending tho! ultimately i guess the story ran out of juice once he defeated the big bad - i wanted him to go on to become king and see all the nation building and more political intrigues
Sandmann1st
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Dec 26, 2019
- Messages
- 183
- Apr 19, 2024
- #29
I feel like the final battle was kind of eh compared to the fight to get to the castle
A
ARealCoolGuy
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Feb 13, 2021
- Messages
- 2,415
- Apr 19, 2024
- #30
Ending feels rushed, but there's supposedly more side stories coming, so hopefully that smooths it out. Overall, a very fun and satisfying read, if a bit shallow. Definitely a favourite of mine when in comes to vertical webcomics.
Solipsist
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Jan 19, 2018
- Messages
- 2,269
- Apr 20, 2024
- #31
eng1 said:
They had plenty of room to grow. He was only 6th wyze, they could have him work to get more countries as his allies as he worked up wyze to 8th before challenging the dragon
Well, to be fair, I was reading this on-and-off, so I don't have 20/20 vision on this one -- but it sure didn't felt like the author had any more punches to pull with the power levels.
"Wyze", as a tool, stopped being worked on in the last arc. The MC even fused 2 wyze-methods together, and then it just went away, forgotten.
Are there technically ways to make level 6~10 more interesting? Maybe...But at the same time, as a semi-sensible martial-arts story, you want it to be a relatively grounded story. And not have your characters become a Saint / Daoist ascendant that can blow up mountains with a flick of a finger.
I personally felt like the story managed to tap itself out, but I do agree that after giving it some thought, if the author really wanted, or could, there is enough room to make for sensible growth of power.
E
eng1
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Nov 11, 2019
- Messages
- 971
- Apr 20, 2024
- #32
Solipsist said:
Well, to be fair, I was reading this on-and-off, so I don't have 20/20 vision on this one -- but it sure didn't felt like the author had any more punches to pull with the power levels.
"Wyze", as a tool, stopped being worked on in the last arc. The MC even fused 2 wyze-methods together, and then it just went away, forgotten.Are there technically ways to make level 6~10 more interesting? Maybe...But at the same time, as a semi-sensible martial-arts story, you want it to be a relatively grounded story. And not have your characters become a Saint / Daoist ascendant that can blow up mountains with a flick of a finger.
I personally felt like the story managed to tap itself out, but I do agree that after giving it some thought, if the author really wanted, or could, there is enough room to make for sensible growth of power.
Not really,after merging 2 wyzes his next step was going up a level. There are plenty of things to explore, the world building after the civil war arc went to pretty much 0. Despite going on a trip most stuff remained unexplored, characters unutilized
If we are talking about being grounded, fighting the dragon from wyze 6 to near 10 was absurd. The dragon after being annoyed would have 1 shot him at wyze 7 or 8. Or kil the mages in between
The whole last battle was far from grounded.
I agree the story tapped itself out but, but that is due to the author giving up on world building and rushing to the end arc. I think he just got bored and decided to end it, so much so he even forgot to make the MC a monarch despite the title
Personally I started reading this from chapter 1 thinking maybe I am the Monarch got a manga. But eventually found out it wasn't but similar concept. But now I am pretty disappointed how this turned out. It seems like this was too much for the author to handle
Last edited:
Solipsist
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Jan 19, 2018
- Messages
- 2,269
- Apr 21, 2024
- #33
eng1 said:
Not really,after merging 2 wyzes his next step was going up a level. There are plenty of things to explore, the world building after the civil war arc went to pretty much 0. Despite going on a trip most stuff remained unexplored, characters unutilized
If we are talking about being grounded, fighting the dragon from wyze 6 to near 10 was absurd. The dragon after being annoyed would have 1 shot him at wyze 7 or 8. Or kil the mages in between
The whole last battle was far from grounded.
I agree the story tapped itself out but, but that is due to the author giving up on world building and rushing to the end arc. I think he just got bored and decided to end it, so much so he even forgot to make the MC a monarch despite the title
Personally I started reading this from chapter 1 thinking maybe I am the Monarch got a manga. But eventually found out it wasn't but similar concept. But now I am pretty disappointed how this turned out. It seems like this was too much for the author to handle
I agree the last fight was anything but grounded, yes.
And I am clearly not too invested in the story, overall I agree with what you wrote there.
waldo220
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Jan 6, 2019
- Messages
- 531
- May 31, 2024
- #34
The pacing around the Northern Continent arc was awfully rushed, it feels like. Stuff was just hammered in - 1 year time skip to setup random deus ex machina, 2 sudden declarations of romance/marriage that had no buildup whatsoever (Agatha was barely mentioned and covered after she moved to Proundmund), the sudden jump into going for the Emperor when Anxing was all we had for Northern leadership targets. Everything before felt that like an 8 or 9/10, but this last part feels more 6 or 7.
Aztecreader
Banned
- Joined
- Jul 24, 2020
- Messages
- 1,074
- Jun 16, 2024
- #35
I still remember funding this manhwa years ago and waiting patiently for every chapter...was still upset he didn't end up with Ellis since her and lind never had any romance with her one bit. Seems more like the author did it to tell us to deal with it 😂.
Well here is hoping we find another great gem we can all enjoy together. Catch y'all later and hopefully the aide stories are good.
kamentierr
Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Aug 1, 2023
- Messages
- 535
- Jul 21, 2024
- #36
lind is too shocked with the marriage. look at that blank face. lmao
MC's practically a demigod now, with maxed out Wyze and spear level. Even though he's still susceptible to magic, i can't imagine what kind of enemies would pose a threat to him at this point.
Also i wonder how long the artifact/system gonna work. What if he dies of old age and regressed back to his days in 7th legion.
N
noore
Supporter
- Joined
- Mar 20, 2019
- Messages
- 916
- Aug 27, 2024
- #37
azuremirage said:
...I can't believe one of these manhwas actually ended
That's why I prioritize jumping into manhwas that already ended, finish it, and get sad at the state of things again
AMarshmallowOnTop
Member
- Joined
- Jan 5, 2020
- Messages
- 101
- Nov 5, 2024
- #38
Damn, I know romance isn't important at all to the story but at least build on it a little. The fiance was relevant for like a max three chapters. Them ending up together felt so shoehorned and like a complete afterthought.
Also, 90% of this story is war after war and you're telling me not a single core member died? And this whole time Chris just had to give the assassin girl a name and she had no elaborate backstory? BRUH. I was so ready to read about how she was like the last descendant of a dragon bc she looked so similar to the emperor. But nope, the poor girl just got used and the whole buildup to him "finding" her name led to nothing ಠ︵ಠ
You must log in or register to reply here.